Receiving feedback on rough draft

The Final Project Proposal rough draft was very helpful. Alethea walked us through our mistakes (of which we made many) and pointed out very clear steps in writing the draft. This made the actual final paper so much easier, as I finally had a base in which to write my proposal. She navigated us through the website, and showed us where to find things related to our topic. She also walked us through how electric and heating works on our campus. This allowed me to write an even better proposal. Overall the draft was an amazing idea, as I would be lost without it.